After looking at the feedback...
WWW:
- The idea for the montage, using lots of different people wearing different Rayban sunglasses
- Followed the conventions of a sunglass advert, by showing a variety of sunglasses
- Good angle of the shot
EBI:
- The shots need to be taken in different settings
- Poor lighting.. the sunlight should be facing the camera not the person
Grades averaged -
Media language : C/D
Conventions : C /D
Creativity : C /D
Attention to detail : D
Technical proficiency : C/D
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